What I Saw When I Wandered
Wonderland Challenge Day 9

This poem is about what happens when curiosity isn't just a spark, but a bond — when you become loyal to the journey itself, even if it hurts you.
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I only meant to peek, just a little curiosity,
past the lip of the known world where the sky turned lavender
and the trees hummed low secrets in a language I almost understood,
drawn by a glint between leaves,
a glimmering puzzle of colour and echo laid like a map across water I thought was solid.
I stepped carefully, barefoot across the pieces —
some soft and new, others cracked with memory —
each one asking something of me,
offering riddles shaped like butterflies,
their wings so fragile I wept when one touched my shoulder.
I glimpsed the truth then —
that some paths lead not forward but inward,
and that wonder is a loyal companion
only until the forest begins to speak in forgotten tongues,
until the light curls strange at the edges and the flowers lean in too closely,
until what I thought was magic begins to remember me by name.
Still, I wandered.
Because loyalty, once forged in longing, becomes impossible to betray,
and I had already promised the path I would follow it to the end,
even if that meant never returning whole,
even if the final piece of the curious puzzle was me.
About the Creator
Diane Foster
I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.
When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.



Comments (3)
Oh, Wonderfully written, Diane
When will I be fortunate enough? Unload the burden
Oh I love the last line! That truly brings it full circle!