What I Couldn’t See
(when the world tilts forward challenge)
It happened
just as the world tilted forward—
not with thunder,
but the hush before rain.
I built glass castles
in the shadow of my own name—
forgot I was made of stars,
not the silence between them.
I mistook survival for sin.
Wore shame like a ribbon
braided into my breath.
Let mirrors lie
as I vanished
into the velvet folds of doubt.
Years slipped—
sweet breath held underwater,
truth wrapped in wax paper,
a prayer never spoken aloud.
I whispered sorry
to the girl
with dusk in her curls,
to the voice that trembled
before it learned to sing.
But even ash remembers light.
The moss still loved me
when I could not love myself.
The stones kept my stories
when I tried to forget them.
The stars never blamed me
for falling.
There were always hands
just outside the frame—
not saving,
but steadying.
And the mirror?
It never stopped waiting.
It knew.
It saw the sky in me
long before I remembered
how to rise.
About the Creator
Stacey Mataxis Whitlow (SMW)
Welcome to my brain. My daydreams are filled with an unquenchable wanderlust, and an unrequited love affair with words haunts my sleepless nights. I do some of my best work here, my messiest work for sure. Want more? https://a.co/d/iBToOK8


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