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What I Cannot Undo

On the Weight of Irrevocable Choice

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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I turned away and now I bear the cost

The choice I made returns in every breath

No prayer can mend the moment that I lost

The days are chains that bind me to the past

Each step reminds me of that silent death

I turned away and now I bear the cost

The path grows darker though the years have crossed

Regret consumes the very life it left

No prayer can mend the moment that I lost

I count the hours tally up the frost

The heart beats slow beneath its shroud of theft

I turned away and now I bear the cost

I hear the toll of all that I have tossed

Each memory strikes with merciless bequest

No prayer can mend the moment that I lost

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Tiffany Gordon3 months ago

    Fabulous work!

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Well done! Great phrasing. Loved “count the hours, tally up the frost”

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