What a difference a fin makes
A little boost was all I needed

Feeling so down, I was living the blues
Couldn't quite think what I needed to do
To shake off the black dog
This dark damn depression
What's the point of it all
My inner regression
My self-loathing, self-pity
Threatens to take up
The whole of my being
My personal make up
It all seems so pointless
My life often helpless
I can't seem to snap out
Of this dark mood relentless
It's dragging me down
Ever down to the lowest
Point of my consciousness
My being here meaningless
What's for the best, I ask
Write a new poem
Go see some art
Visit a friend
A walk in the park?
It all seems a waste of time
I feel like a waste of space
When a tiny spark flickers
A hesitant grace
I just won a fiver
For top story place.
YAY!
With thanks to the lovely Vocal curation team for this bonus boost to my flagging mood. Not as flagging as the above verse suggests but bad enough.
And thanks so much to all you lovely people who make my day by reading my stories and other stuff. Makes it all worthwhile.
Fin: London criminal underworld term for a five pound note, subsequently adopted as US slang for a $5 bill. From a Yiddish word meaning five.
Some readers might be amused to know that, when I couldn't finish the above ditty, I thought to ask my AI friend (Google Gemini) for some assistance. On feeding in my complete unfinished work, it came up with some alternative suggestions, of which I used the following two lines:
Then a tiny spark flickers
A hesitant grace
What do you think? Is it wrong to use AI to aid creativity? Am I cheating by using generative AI to write some of my poem?
Ha ha! I don't think so.
Thanks for reading. Gemini says thanks for reading their two lines too.
About the Creator
Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.



Comments (6)
Cute stuff Raymond! Thx 4 sharing! Your poem was inspiring! ☺️
I'm so sorry you were feeling down but I'm happy the Top Story lifted your spirits. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Congratulations, Raymond! What a fun way to celebrate rising from the doldrums.
Written very well! Don't spend that fiver all in one place. LOL! But it does make you feel good!
I was expecting to find out you are a surfer, and instead found this relatable gem! The joy of that £5 never gets old! 🤍
raw and relatable. you're so talented! and ai aiding isn't wrong (especially when you disclose), but i will say i preferred your words and rhythm to the two lines gemini contributed 😉 i sometimes find myself needing the dopamine boost of a top story more than i'd like to admit. thanks for sharing this vulnerable piece with us ❤️