Image by Eleanor Smith from Pixabay
Shuffle, knock-knock, pause,
Eye to peep hole, room temp chills-
Outside, by now, in
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Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States
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Comments (11)
Mystery and creepy and a Halloween special - Nicely Done
Nicely done, definitely a creepy peep hole.
Much mystery and dark allure Marilyn. Extremely well written! I love the image you used… it is so unusual. Take a look at our new unofficial challenge Tales from Beyond: The Haunted Letter Challenge. I believe you’d be a super-natural for this one.
Nicely done, Marilyn!!! I forgot there's a horror haiku challenge as well. Too many to keep up with, haha. Can't wait to try one.
So much suspension in just a few lines. I love your image too!
Your cover pic is so freaking creepy! That combined with your Haiku reminded me of the black eyed children! I loved it!
Oh, I love this. And the picture is so creepy... it's a perfect choice.
Fantastic writing Marilyn! 🩷
This made me think of Wednesday....it's got that rhythm!
Yeah this is really really creepy. I can't get over the last line. Reading that then looking back at the photo. Killer. Best of luck on the challenge 🤗 ❤️
What an ode to the season of Trick or treat. Good job.