We three brothers went separate ways
Through life we plunged, sifting through the maze
One of us, led to instruct youthful minds
One of us, moved to provide therapy, reading doctoral signs
One of us, inspired to advise college students
All of us, in our work, fluent
Mother and Father would never have known
Until we three brothers were up and grown
It is interesting how different biological brothers can be
All unique and free
We three brothers all found wives
For meaningful relationships we all had drives
We three brothers all became fathers
All of us doting on our daughters
For holidays we three brothers sit and watch
As all the little cousins play hopscotch
This is the life to be had
For as we watch we three brothers are certainly glad
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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I love how the different paths each brothers take while still being connected by family and love! I think you probably got married in 19— that's the most attractive thing in you because in west, it's not common to get married that earlier, right?