We Form a Geodesic Dome
A love poem inspired by a prompt
To feel complete
In your arms' embrace
Is home.
To search for meaning
Inside our space
Is home.
To feel all feelings
No matter the time of day,
Is home.
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You are what makes my heart warm up with joy
You are the tingle in my happy fancy playboy.
All sorts of whispers, all unthinkable hopes,
Are ours to discover,
To pretend they're more than brush strokes
For a work called life, a structure to uncover.
You are all I need to live our freedom rhythm,
Together we form a geodesic dome
A miraculous complex construction called home.
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Thank you for the prompt, Kay Husnick! Read her article here.
Prompt: What does it mean to feel at home? Write a poem describing that feeling. Consider when you last truly felt at home. Do you feel at home where you live now? When was the first time you were able to put that feeling into words?
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Gabriela is studying to become a full-stack developer while being a mother of three small kids. This requires her to pay for some graduate programs and boot camps to gain experience. She is writing articles on Medium, Vocal and Substack to inspire others and fund her journey.
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Gabriela Trofin-Tatár
Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/
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Thanks for sharing your use of one of my prompts! I'd love to see it if you use any more of them.
This was so beautiful! A very wonderful take on the prompt!