"I Cry,Cry,Cry"
When the morning sun sheds a new day,
when my lungs fill, denies death away
When finance's takes hold, no strenght left to will,
when your stomach growl's, won't sit still
"You Cry,Cry,Cry"
When friends hug with the feel of love and passion,
when a room in a corner feel's like a mansion
When the one by your side turn's there head away,
leave's you in the dark with nothing to say
"We Cry,Cry,Cry"
When those close to us have already moved on,
when a feel for there touch lie's deep, forever gone
But keep our head's high strive forward and maintain,
for tears of your own with forever wash away the pain
About the Creator
Louie Vega Jr
Marine Corp-4yrs/Mixology-6yrs/Paramedicine-6yrs/Culinary-9yrs/?. Hello all, seems like i can't quite find the right career, till then enjoy poems from all forms of genre, just depends on where my mind takes me that day.
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Comments (2)
Wow… I really enjoyed this, and honestly, it hit me deeper than I expected. You’ve captured something real here—those moments when life pulls us apart but somehow makes us stronger at the same time. You have a gift for putting heavy feelings into simple, powerful words. I’m proud of you for sharing this, it takes guts to open your heart like that. Keep writing, keep expressing—you never know who you might be helping without even realizing it. You’ve got something special, and I’m honored you shared it with me.
Good morning, at times emotion's come quickly, sometimes in bursts and that's what this was. A rush of despair came and out spilled We Cry. Hope you all enjoy it. Started 05/13, finished 05/13.