If it do erupt
Like in Pompeii my love
We burn together
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Gal Mux
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Hey there, I just read your poem and I have to say, it's really great! The way you play with words and use vivid imagery really draws the reader in and makes them feel like they're right there in the moment with you. Your writing has a certain rhythm and flow that's just mesmerizing. I can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece, and it definitely shows. Speaking of poetry, I just published a new piece myself that I think you might enjoy. It's a bit different from what you've written here, but I think you'll appreciate the emotional depth and honesty that I've tried to convey. Check it out and let me know what you think - I always love getting feedback from other poets! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/love-s-lyrical-journey%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
great
Burning Words For Sure Like A Flow Of Bright Lava A Fine Haiku Gal
Beautiful! And that last line was superb. Great work :)
A great Haiku indeed!