As tides rose,My brother said,
"Are you ready to fight?"
"Let tides beware,"
Said I.
With that, we unleashed
Our magical, invisible swords.
And we fixed our feet
In sands that
Changed their positions
With the flow of the sea.
As we charged towards
The sparkling tides that
Brushed our soft skin,
Leaving a joyous smile.
The sea fight soon turned into a
Water fight, one that only happens when
Siblings are your companions
On the adventurous sea ride!
About the Creator
Anwesha
The one who showers every plant, keep trust in that gardener's chant.
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What a fantastic piece! I truly appreciate your words- it's truly wonderful! ✨
Awe so nice
That is so fun! The bond between Sister and Brother is "Matchless" and "Unique". Thank you for sharing this piece, It reminds me of the fights that I had with my elder brother 😆 Those times were cute and magnificent ❤ You've captured the joyful and charming scenery in your words ✨ Loved it, Anwesha 🙌