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Watching planes

By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Watching planes
Photo by Jorgen Hendriksen on Unsplash

Dreams and metal birds, fly

across my sky, waiting for

the day I take flight

Haiku

About the Creator

The Invisible Writer

Life goals - vacation always- work never

Creator of unreadable stories

Writer of bad poetry

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  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    I love haiku poetry and yours is very strong

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Do you plan to be a pilot, Will?

  • I especially loved the metal birds and that last line!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Sublime, chap, sublime! that last line is so rich in meaning!

  • Testabout a year ago

    I like the last bit, the dual meaning that comes from "waiting until I take flight". It could be in reference to your mortality or a coming trip... very thought provoking!! Nicely done Will!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    "Metal birds," I like that. Well done, Will.

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