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gathered in a crowd
I do not want to be
alone
I would rather be
amongst friends
amongst family
amongst the noise and bustle
you will not catch me
hiding in the corners
I am always
looking for excitement
dreading the thought of
being alone
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Kari McLeese
teacher, wife, mom, bibliophile
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Comments (4)
This read differently both ways, which has been a tricky one to execute properly for this challenge! “amongst the noise and bustle you will not catch me hiding in the corners” works really well both ways, completely flipping the narration. Well done👏
Great!!😊💕
Very well done. I love the creative placement and usage of your words!
Great job on this. Well done.