
I was walking down the dirt path with Unforgiveness,
all the while, it felt like a dreadful illness.
Then Inspiration struck like lightning,
oh, how alarming and frightening!
Inspiration had dropped Forgiveness from the sky,
not yet quite understanding why.
Forgiveness dropkicked Unforgiveness down a cliff,
and the birds began to sing a joyous-chorus riff.
Now, walking with Forgiveness, my legs are getting tired,
but he picks me up, because otherwise, I would have expired.
We make it home and Forgiveness stays at the door,
wanting him to come in, but he doesn't, no matter how much I implore.
"You've got this," he says and starts to walk away,
oh, how I truly wish he would, forever, stay!
But, I wave him farewell and sit down at the table inside,
not feeling easy, or very satisfied.
Blinking, I see the table is set with a full spread,
grabbing the warm, home-made, buttered bread,
to my right is Redemption smiling proudly,
all the while merry bells in my mind rang quite loudly.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Ohhh, this one’s got action, wisdom, and a full-course meal—talk about a poetic plot twist! That’s the kind of energy we need in life!