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Vividness

a Sijo

By Some GuyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

I jump up and I can fly, suddenly, on the ground now

The hills speak, actually, they're singing a song for me

Then ringing, The vividness dies, Search memory, But little stays

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Some Guy

I kinda suck at writing but I enjoy it

Anyway, here's a dumb little haiku:

The gunslinger draws

His opponent does the same

oh dear, they both died

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  • Sonia Heidi Unruh3 years ago

    Love the move from singing to ringing! And thank you for introducing me to Sijo poetry.

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