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Vicious Dance

A villanelle about a dancer's obsession with mastering dance

By Linétte Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Vicious Dance
Photo by Ahmad Odeh on Unsplash

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight

I must dance, there’s no time, no space to waste

I can’t stop, I won’t stop until the day I’m great

Until the turns are rounder and the lines are straight

Perfection is reached, the frail body erased

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight

Until sweat drips down and exhaustion gains weight

And the body becomes numb, injuries unfaced

I can’t stop, I won’t stop until the day I’m great

Until I reach the impossible, prodigious fate

A mortal body expecting the divine to be showcased

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight

Until I feed the dance, and the dance feeds me, I wait

For the spark to ignite and make haste

I can’t stop, I won’t stop until the day I’m great

Until the fire consumes me and I consume it

Ashes from the spark my soul once blazed

One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight

I can’t stop, I won’t stop until the day I’m great

Villanelleart

About the Creator

Linétte

They say pictures say more than 1000 words. But what is the closest physical thing that can understand and express the soul itself? To me, words are the nearest thing. The soul and nature are connected. With my writing, I explore their bond

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