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Vapor

A Haiku

By Altum VeritasPublished about a year ago 1 min read

All of life exists

In the tiny gap between

Lightning and thunder

Haikunature poetryElegy

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Altum Veritas

Christ-follower, Writer, Story Teller. I'm passionate about creating stories that resonate emotionally and deeply, exploring the human experience in all its complexity through poetry and dark, gritty fiction. Come find the deeper truth.

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Belleabout a year ago

    What an expressive way to say this. There is so much that could be interpreted here, but I love how this could be a symbol for how short life really is, that the life we have on this earth is only a fraction of a fraction of a fraction of time, in comparison to how much time has passed from time's beginning... Truly a stunning piece. [3/5]

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Stunning image to go along with such a deep-thought poem! Excellent work!

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