Sink your teeth deep...drink
suckle from the bloody sap
Make me become...Death!
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Novel Allen
You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.
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The Dryads are Calling
They say the forest by Phoenix River sings. Perhaps it is just the wind howling through the leaves, or a particular birdsong. But Percy Fisher knows better; he knows what lies in those woods, and he knows that the forest sings of his demise.
By Leigh Hooperabout 18 hours ago in Fiction
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A rather alluring, yet deeply disturbing final wish. Fantastic work and best of luck in the challenge. That middle line, I must say. It sounds very nice on the ear 🤗❤️
A chilling haiku that captures the allure and terror of vampiric transformation perfectly.
Wow. This is great. So creative
Very well written!
Feeding the vampire willingly///living forever, what a wicked request. Well, tis almost Halloween.
Suckle is one of my least favorite words lol. But you used it to great effect here, so I have no complaints. Well done Novel :)
This was very dark 😳