Valentine's Dream
the last 50 words of the 14th
By Savannah K. WilsonPublished 11 months ago • 1 min read

well ... that happened
Must be a dream
A trick of the blue light
How my heart fluttered
Taking that leap
One single moment
Of bravery, hope, and love
*Deep breath*
Here I go
Ask the question
And wait
Not for long
'I accept,' she says
Is this a dream?
Must be a dream
About the Creator
Savannah K. Wilson
She/Her | Australian 🏳️⚧️ Author
Queer and all class with a touch of sass! (or maybe the reverse!)
short stories, poetry, life experience


Comments (7)
This is so cool! That moment when someone accepts a marriage proposal lasts an eternity and always causes a swell of emotions. You captured it beautifully! ⚡💙⚡
This is so sweet! Good work!
It wasn't a dream, if she accepted, or least I hope not. Well Done!!
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Short, sweet, and full of heart—like the perfect moment frozen in time. Feels like holding your breath before everything changes. Love it!
I hope it's not a dream but the reality. Loved your poem!
I love your love poem! Great work!