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UTOPIA[Our perfect world]

A Renaissance thought (Scripting Utopia Challenge)

By Karun Published 2 years ago 1 min read

For the (Scripting Utopia Unofficial Challenge) By Kayleigh Fraser ✨

Utopia The words are from the Renaissance, they are one of the most change makers.

Rather than scripting it like precoded, I want it to be our perfect world we strive to create our present earth a better world. We need to think a better world, thoughts create behaviours and behaviours become habits and subconscious. Our combined subconscious consciousness creates reality and our world. Think Better! Create Better!

[Our perfect world]

In our utopia...

Lakes, farms, animals,

All treated as brothers.

A Peaceful life, Living Tranquil Diary

No servants, only friends, we're ourself angels

Everyone helps each other.

None more powerful, none held above.

Harmony reigns close, peace shines afar.

No harm to nature, no plastics mar.

It's a world of balance, a world of love.

Nature rules with delicate might,

Her forces guide us, our source of light.

No currency here, just barter's grace.

In this land, none fails face.

Each heart has a purpose, obvious and true.

Education's path is mastery due.

None rules utopia,

nature does and we must accept it

and respect it.

every voice heard

Mind using positive words

Pure Grand Making it better we all belong

hand in hand we travel along

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About the Creator

Karun

🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️

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  • Esala Gunathilake2 years ago

    O lovely utopia. Well done on your challenge entry.

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    Great work! Truly does sound like a dream world.

  • shanmuga priya2 years ago

    Exceptional writting.

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