Though the closure we longed for may never come...
Cause In times of love we learned to hate...
Through the pain and trial it was us...
We dreamed the day we'd celebrate... Nieve to lust when we lost touch...
Desperate for eachothers grace...
Our hearts told us LIES!!!
and yet we still believed...
Nature took it's course on us with karmic energy...
Don't feel guilty, don't be sad, our choice was ours to leave...
If only we could be strangers again...
But that we cannot be...
We changed in time, call it divine
How we lost everything
Lessons learned the hardest when we lose ourselves to "ME".
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Christian Saldana
Lost in translation and finding the words to fill a page with an intrinsic insight into a life most have never experienced Living in a country named "the melting pot" who loves to call gang members a black kettle I share my life with you.
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