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A Breakup Nonet

By M.J. CarlockPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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i saw you this weekend, friday night;

you were smiling—happy—eyes bright,

i need you to know, i lied,

when you asked how i was,

and i said, "alright."

i'm still a mess,

after us...

and i

miss...

heartbreaksad poetry

About the Creator

M.J. Carlock

I find that words are powerful; regardless of their form, they carry influence over our lives, and we must wield their power with both wisdom and heart.

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  • Jumbo Slice about a year ago

    Excellent!

  • Dylan about a year ago

    Beautifully written, well done!

  • Obsidian Wordsabout a year ago

    Oof beautiful. The trail off ending is stunning

  • Ameer Bibiabout a year ago

    It kinda feels bad and really sad

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    So profound

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Very nice. I feel the despair and heartache when I read your nonet poem.

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a year ago

    What a painful breakup. Your poem is really heartbreaking.

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