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Footsteps in the fog—
something follows, but I hear
only my heartbeat.
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Love the image. Sets the scene nicely before your words come to us. Damn. That was terrifying. In the fog. Not being able to see anything knowing something is coming, it sets your heartbeat out of whack. Thats a sure sign, we are vulnerable. That thing gots to go. This was sweetly terrifying 🤗❤️
Oooo, a silent, invisible follower. Loved your poem!
Thrilling in a way for I have had this sensation from time to time.
evocative of the unseen fear. well done!