Her eyes, like the sky,
Wild, blue and yonder. And me -
Not a Mister Wright.
About the Creator
the Phuzz
Unfocused imaginator hoping to psych myself into getting some things out of my overstuffed mind.
Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it โ and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith4 days ago in Humor
Comments (11)
Is this poem in the sky-ku contest? It is interesting how you compared her eyes to the sky, nice!!! I have 45 poems in this contest.
This is the best thing I've read all day!!! Love love love love love it!
Congratulations on your TS. Not surprising at all. It's fabulous!
Sorry, I forgot to congratulate you on top story๐๐
Oh no, this is so sad. I want you to be the one!๐ฎ
Concise. Nice.
congrats and well written
Congratulations to Top Story !!! Keep it up. ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ
The building blocks of this, so that the reader ends up atop an unearthed whimsical platform of word play and feeling, are so intentional and satisfying. This takes the haiku experience to new heights. Well done, and congratulations on top story! I adore this, and I have faith it will place for sure.
Heart touching....
Touching poem