
I loved you quietly,
like a song I hummed to myself
in the dark,
hoping you’d hear it somewhere
and turn.
I watched you laugh
and felt a hollow bloom in my chest—
wanting to be the reason
behind that light,
knowing I never could.
I traced your shadow
on the sidewalks,
followed the sound of your voice
through crowded streets,
but you moved through the world
like I was nothing but air.
Sometimes I catch myself smiling
at the thought of you,
and it hurts,
because I know
you’ll never feel the weight of this love
pressed quietly against my ribs.
I am learning to love the ache itself,
to find beauty in a heart
that loves without return,
because even in longing,
I am alive,
and I have known you—
even if only in my own silent way
About the Creator
Zakir Ullah
I am so glad that you are here.
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