Universe Of Energy
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Back in 1993 I ventured into Exxons Universe of Energy
Stepping inside the Pavilion for all to see
A Massive display of kinetic moving prismatic art
Displaying a kaleidoscope of extinct animals
Built with robotic parts
The theater seats then began moving down a musical Orchestral track
Where all around were Swamp gases of Dinosaurs
Feeling eerie, I could not turn back
Included in this picture, surrounded by dry ice
Stood a Edaphosaurus, a family of Brontosaurus, Stegosaurus, Allosaurus
& Ornithomimus portrayed in King Size !
Within the Prehistoric assemble above the audience in cars
Loomed a Colony of Pteranodon
Sinking down into a oozing pit of tar
I feared for my life
Watching tourists duck in their seats
Ending with an erupting Volcano
Backwards in time the ride did retreat
Returning to the theatre gleamed a bright red Sun
With present day oil drums
Pumping out millenniums of Dino blood
A lost world giving Energy
Like dragonflies of fossil fuels preserved
Eons ago in petrified Paleontological Amber
About the Creator
Ocusan M
I write in a surrealistic style learning new realities as i researched Quantum physics in Quantum Dreaming where the man had a Quantum computer in his home that could see into the future.
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Comments (4)
The language in this is delicious and wondrous. Congratulations on placing! This was a ride of a poem and one my dinosaur-loving kids will get a kick out of. I'm excited to read this and watch their eyes widen. Beautiful poem.
Congratulations 🎉 Adore the imagery including the picture. The picture is so adorable it almost makes me want one. 😍☺️
Enjoyed your writing! Congratulations on Runner-up!!! 🥳
Absolutely brilliant.