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Unfinished story

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By Harydo NeonPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

Did you really think it was supposed to end great?

This was a station I would have loved to park

A fire I was happy sparked

A moment I'd love to see, on repeat, at the theatre

A garden of blossoming purple hibiscus flowers

Maybe my lack of parking ability is my flaw

Maybe feeling ignited isn't something that's meant to last

Maybe I tried too hard to feel the viewer's angst

Probably my fault I got to watch the flowers die

If I knew the last time was going to be the last,

I would have held you tighter

I would have kissed you for way longer

Till my breathing ceased or got heavier

A case of right people vs wrong time

A case of hurt people vs sabotage

A case of a blind leading the crippled

A case of a bird afraid of the sky

So maybe I didn't think it would end great

Caught up in webs spawned at honeymoon phase

A book without a sequel , maybe an allegory

A published book to an unfinished story.

slam poetryStream of Consciousnesssad poetry

About the Creator

Harydo Neon

I drain my thoughts through my pen. That's the only way I breathe.

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Outstanding

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  • Test11 months ago

    Unfinished story

  • Joe Patterson12 months ago

    This spoke to me louder than ever.

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