Unexpected Dinner Guest
If we don't eat it, they'll have the rest.
While fishing on Champlain, my Dad and I set up camp.
The ground around us is moist and rather damp.
While fixing our dish
We grill several fish
The smell attracts the legend, the lake monster named "Champ."
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Fun one!
Careful Thavien. Don’t get eaten by champ!!
Lol, guess Champ went chomp 🤣
Careful of the beast. Good one.