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A White Dress

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

That white cotton dress

blowing gently in the breeze

Has no recollection of the part, it played

Hanging there alone, on the line, as do I

Watching quietly as it lightly flutters

in the warm summer air

Sparks a memory of the first time I wore that dress.

The first time we met.

I was young, naive and trusting

The moon and stars watched on

as music seemed to play, out of nowhere

Those dreamy days of love and laughter

soon turned, as the clouds -

to red eyes and bruised knuckles

*

I can't help but wonder what life would be like

if I'd never bought that dress

If we’d never met.

But we did, and now, as I put that dress on for the last time

I realize...

We were just living unedited

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  1. Compelling and original writing

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  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wow. That was really, really good. Well done, my friend.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    There's always a quiet profundity to your poetry, Kelli and I'm glad to have the opportunity to read it. Another outstanding piece!

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Insanely powerful, just like always. Your writing is just phenomenal!

  • Sonia Heidi Unruhabout a year ago

    So beautiful, so moving -- such a gentle poem, the violence comes as a shock. the line about putting on the dress for the last time seems ominous. And that profound last line!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Beautiful words for what looked like a wedding dress to me when dreams are to be happily ever after, but I guess things happen.

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