If we could take back the pain for just
a moment, would we have lasted?
If our no's turned into our
yes's, could we have made it
the way we should have?
Can I take it
all back just
to have
you?
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Loved your nonet- sad and emotional! ❣️
This is very emotional, and very thought provoking. There have been many instances in my past where I have asked this question in break-ups, and I am sure I am not alone. I love how you have used emotion to clearly depict the sadness that a break up can bring with it.
We will always be haunted by the "what ifs". Loved your poem!