/uncomfort_
as painful as a child's play

A poem? I grimace, the notion dismissed, but it sticks in my mind like an unwelcome guest
I glance out the window at the cool morning air, and run a clawed hand through my dank, greasy hair
This wasn’t the challenge it was meant to be, I know jack about writing let alone poetry
Comfort, they asked for, but where would I start? Just write, Google said, it will come from your heart
What bullshit is that? It’s no good at all, made for a lake, in a frame, on a wall
I sip my black coffee, the heat and the smell, takes me briefly away, and it’s all just as well
I can’t write poetry, it’s not fair at all, in defense my body curls into a ball
I close my eyes to the world, pull my gown tight around, clear my head and exhale with narry a sound
I could doze in this sunbeam, in peace for a time, but have to think about comfort and making words rhyme
A duvet, a blanket, a comforter, a shroud, the froth on your coffee or the edge of a cloud
A smile from a loved one, kids tucked up in bed, as you drift off to sleep a kiss on the head
These things all bleed comfort, they should make me relax, but the tension remains as I think of the task
A poem, I shudder, one of my own, takes me out, puts me down, in my discomfort zone.
About the Creator
James Jensen
I've wanted to be a writer since I first ran my hand along the spines of books at my school library. I aim to write a Short Story A Week using randomly generated writing tips but do get in touch to suggest a topic, prompt, or story
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Comments (3)
Awesome poem
Loved that you used the concept of metawriting!
Poetry was very much in my “discomfort zone” when I first started writing it. Now I find it to be the easiest thing I write.