our love burns like the sun
bright and everlasting
until the very end
two souls connected,
interlocked with passion
you, intelligent and inseverable,
let me match you word for word
and touch for touch
see me where i am and have me
in living for you, i live for myself
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angela hepworth
Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!
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Comments (9)
two souls, very beautiful words
This was so lovely and beautifully written!
Wow!🤩 this entire poem is potent, from first to last word ✅. I especially like: “our love burns like the sun bright and everlasting until the very end”.
Powerful poem, Angela! Really struck by "let me match you word for word and touch for touch" And the last line rings with an important truth!
The first line sets the tone for an insightful read. Loved it!
Ah, now that’s the kind of love that shines like a cosmic glow-up! Living for each other, but also for themselves. Pure magic, pure connection. Love to see it! ✨
Yes beautiful indeed!
And this captures well the interconnectedness that should characterize love. Well done!
This is beautiful and each line carries so much weight and power and just hope and wonder! Love it a lot, Angela, well done!