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Twinkle Not Narcissist

Apple Not of My EYe

By Mariann CarrollPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Twinkle Twinkle Little Toes

How I Hate your Nosey Nose

Stop your stalking on my Ass

Twinkle Twinkle Little Toes

How I hate your negative prose

Stop your lying nose

Twinkle Twinkle Little Toes

How I hate how you don’t care

Stop your fake affection there

Twinkle Twinkle Little Toes

You no longer have

my precious Rose 🥀

Twinkle Twinkle Little Toes

You no longer the apple of my eyes

But a sight for sore eyes

Let stop your destruction there

I no longer need you here.

Twinkle Twinkle Little Toes

It’s time to say our goodbyes

Cause I no longer welcome

Toxic behavior here or there

Bye Twinkle Twinkle Little toes!

How you like that Apple ? Good riddance to the twinkle twinkle little toes.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Editors HHM IT3 years ago

    https://youtu.be/mkTCEb6mTvY When The Narcissist Realises They Shouldn't Have Played You

  • Editors HHM IT3 years ago

    When The Narcissist Knows That You Know https://youtu.be/4CEtjwUjdME

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    I Love it! So Creative & Powerful! :)

  • Ahhhhh! I loved it so much! Especially the lines where from apple of my eye they became a sight for sore eyes and how you hate that they don't care and you asked to stop with their fake affection. So in love with this poem!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Very nice.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    I loved what you did with this prompt! Very creative :)

  • Wow! Sound like twinkle toes needs to go!

  • Dawn Salois3 years ago

    Well done! I l love your take on the prompt.

  • Great entry to the prompt, loved it

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