embers of the golden sun
circling the
lunar disc, as if they were timeless lovers,
intimacy of a devastating kind
perhaps the most powerful, and
spectacular sight in the world to behold.
earth is merely the audience for their burning performance.
☽☀☾
About the Creator
B
I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
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FPS: The Last Flame Challenge Winners
Welcome to our first Winners Announcement of the year and to the final challenge in the Fall Poetry Series. The Last Flame invited writers to sit with endings, using fire as a central image to consider what remains when something burns out: ash, warmth, memory, silence, or the faint promise of what comes next. The strongest pieces treated endings as gradual rather than sudden, allowing them to flicker, dim, and linger.
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Comments (9)
Intimacy of a devastating kind. Nicely Done!!
Awesome story I like it congratulations 🎉🎉
This is quite a definition of an eclipse good work.
A dangerous kind of love 😅. This is a great poem brin 😊
Loved the last line of earth as the audience! Great acrostic, Brin!
Oh wowser, Brin! Stunning work!
Burning performance, that caught my fancy! Awesome Acrostic!
But an appreciative audience for sure.
Nice job!!!