It's buried deep
hidden within a chest
that's locked
You'll need a key
and to decipher the clues
laid out in the hues
of smiling eyes
and tucked into corners
of warm smiles
soft hands
will guide the way
and the warmth of a whisper
may tell you the location
if you seek
so shall you find.
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Comments (3)
I absolutely love the idea of clues hidden in smiling eyes and warm smiles. What amazing imagery!
"if you seek so shall you find." - the choice is ours, in the end ❤️ Thanks for sharing this, Ellie~
Love how you balance the adventure with an underlying sense of longing.