Trapped in your microcosm vacuum with your deep created hell
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you needed me to be inside of your hell
Trapped in your deep hell
Your pit of self-created gutted shit
That screamed endlessly and
Pounded on my earth plates
Tectonically unsound
Running around the microcosm
A tight, stale vacuum
Master puppeteer with strings attached to your head
Eye lids pushed back to reveal whites
Nighttime sounds that creak good will
Entering me in and out and in and out
As you save yourself from your gutless glory
Feverish toils inside a beautiful, nasty shadow
You lurk around to pull up my shirt to check out the fresh bruises
Your handiwork
Canvas on earth
You choose to splatter
Your deep hell on to
You had it for too long
Now you can’t hack it
Getting cut off from the last bit of dry earth
It’s mine
Not yours
It’s never been yours
Get inside your room and linger
Until you pick out the right spinning object to throw,
As now it hits you back into the white void of your desire
Tornado warning microcosm
You won’t have a say about this weather
Anymore.
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Comments (3)
More of the Raven. Horrifying to think about what you went through.
Oh this was so heartbreaking! So emotional! Awesome job!
Damn! That's powerful. "You won't have a say about this weather anymore." You tell 'em!