Tracking Marimba
Hunting for autumn's subtleties- off-Broadway percussions

Autumn is an earth-based Broadway. I enjoy the show: bronze, crimson, golden-trimmed trees- captivating backdrops with many a fine actor, singer, dancer, entertaining me. Apple orchard pickings, red stripes, blush, yellow-green- Fuji, Gala, Honeycrisp, Golden Delicious- I eat it all up. Romping squirrels, spiraling leaves, wind-scattered chestnuts, weather shifts, pumpkin patch surprises-- jackolantern galleries in intermingling oranges- they all meet my heartfelt applause.
But I need more.
Autumn is an earth-based Broadway. A showy production akin to xylophone's presence. Brighter, higher-pitched moments dressed in loud and proud colors, piercing through the orchestra of seasonal delight. All the obvious, look at me, hear me, feel me instances- sensory sensations that bring the house down with communal cheers, standing ovations, and inspiring encores.
While it all entices me, I search for more, tracking marimba...
Marimba, xylophone's sister, is mellower, warmer in her own special way- an off-Broadway performance. Her costumes are not fancy. Her presence, not grandeur. Her audience is small. Her show appeals to intimate sessions when solo claps afford the best reviews.
Tracking marimba means walking off typical pathways, the common autumn boulevard, route, walkway, and lane to lesser-traveled forest, the secluded wooded areas.
In hermit mode, I am a high priestess on the brink of Scorpio season, a huntress, pacing the woods in slow-mo. Daylight dimmed by thickened forestry, shadowed canopy meets sun rays in breakthrough occurrences, lightbeams tracing a walkway through forest floored maples, dirt soiled and tattered; I steady the course with my bow and arrow. My hunting gear is not outsourced: the bow is my heart, arrow, my spirit.
My mud-mucked hiking boots are bottom-lined with accumulated maples, sticking to me as I sludge and crunch wooded wonderland. An overhead whoosh, Swallows and Flycatchers, bid me adieu, and a distant woodpecker welcomes my expedition.
A sit with it moment on an old hallowed log prepares my bow and arrow as a nearby leaning Oak sings to me.
Marimba, she is here. I've found her. Her percussion is not a belt-it-out performance. Her notes are rhythmic.
She reaches out to me, I abide. I go to her, leaning against her, reciprocating her pulsation. Tuned in to softer moments, percussion like yarn opens a heartfelt discussion. With my palm on aging wood and a head down trice, marimba graces the underbelly with a set from nature's subtle music. Her fellow actors, dancers, and singers are the lost in the shuffle autumn instances that most show seekers miss.
No bright colors. No harsh indications of seasonal transition. No over-eager performers insisting on commanding center stage. Just a delicate, finer, more intimate presentation.
Autumn is an earth-based Broadway akin to xylophone, yet I prefer marimba, her sister percussionist, found in the off-beaten path, an off-Broadway performance nestled in season attuned wooded settings.
Marimba sings to me in nature's subtleties. My applause is silent. She does not expect accolades. Only presence.
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Author's Note: My entry in this challenge was inspired by my quieter, private moments spent in autumn. While I will forever be in awe of the obvious season-aligned splendor, I find the greatest beauty in the more delicate instances, which many overlook. I hope my exploration of Broadway-related themes and percussion, while nodding to nature, inspires.
Thanks for reading!
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About the Creator
Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States
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Comments (16)
What a glorious metaphor and sensory rich piece, Marilyn! I was enthralled with every line! This is a beautiful and unique entry to the challenge! Best of luck—*feels* like a winner to me!!!! 🩷✨🙏🏽
I love the fact that you track Marimba, Marilyn. Loving the metaphor...and the way you tell the tale. On the trail with you.
This is so beautiful and amazing Marilyn. Thank you for the best autumn ever ❤️
Very unique take on the challenge. I love marimbas too. I hope you place! 💗🎵
Twas a compelling comparison: love me some Scorpio energy!
“I am a high priestess on the brink of Scorpio season, a huntress, pacing the woods” love it. Will no longer be able to walk in autumnal woods without hearing marimba. Beautifully done
Congratulations on your Top Story!
Congrats on your top story!!
Beautiful
What a beautiful response to the prompt, Marilyn - absolutely lovely in its entirety. Congratulations, too, on a much deserving Top Story.
Congratulations on Top Story. This is beautiful.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Dear Marilyn - Not only are the colors of autumn gorgeous but the pouperie fragrance of the pathway leaves are invigorating, even if they are crushed by 'Mud- mucked boots'. Speaking of 'Woodpeckers'. If you have a moment please see 'Not~Expected' you may giggle at my drawing of a Woodpecker getting an aspirin for his battered headache. I've enjoyed this. Best, Jay Kantor, Vocal Author.
This is intricately amazing Marilyn. Wowed! Congratulations on the top story!
This was so beautiful and calming. Loved it so much!
I see this as a quiet Marimba, sought in calmer spaces. Well wrought, Marilyn.