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to be saved or to be known

escaping the hallway inside my mind

By HailstormPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2025
to be saved or to be known
Photo by charlesdeluvio on Unsplash

In the world inside my head, I stand in a long dark hallway that is filling with smoke.

With one hand, I hit the alarm button. With the other, I write on the walls.

Part of me wants to be saved. The other part, just wants to be known.

As I look around, I realize that soon the smoke will take my breath away.

My breath is my life. If I'm willing to live, I have to get out.

Lucky for me, at the end of the hallway, I notice a light.

So, I begin to run.

As I do, I carry a backpack of broken glass.

Every step forward the heavy backpack slams against my legs and cuts me.

Yet, I can’t put it down.

The pain reminds me that I am alive. That I have the choice to be.

When I reach the light at the end of the hallway, I encounter a door.

One which I have never seen.

One which I don’t know where it leads.

Yet, without fear I go anyway.

Because anywhere is better than the hallway I have always been trapped in.

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  • Jessica McGlaughlin4 months ago

    I think a new backpack is in order: one we start to fill with beautiful things that make us feel alive. Love your poem thank you for sharing it.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • angela hepworth4 months ago

    So powerful!

  • Eventually, we'd find a way out. Loved your poem!

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