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Your blue eyes drew me
My love for you is rich, true,
My pal, my pony.
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Ruth Stewart
Never one to do one thing at a time, I'm currently writing a horror novel and a book of poetry for the daughters of narcissists. Come back soon for a link to be included in all my news, on Vocal and elsewhere. I'd love to get to know you!
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Comments (2)
This was such a sweet Haiku! I loved it!
Aw, that's lovely. Short, but so emotive and sweet.