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By Daniel KPublished about a year ago 1 min read

you sold me on your

blue sky dreams and delivered

with grey sky nightmares

Haikuheartbreaklove poemsperformance poetryvintage

About the Creator

Daniel K

I write love poems about the girl who has a hold over my heart and my life in such a way that neither are my own anymore. The girl I would choose over and over and over again. I love her, and that is the beginning and end of everything.

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Outstanding

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Excellent work!!!

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