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Under my vessels so small,
beyond Godly repair; misunderstanding the thought
of love and lust.
We are all enemies in tears, broken beyond what is fair.
As over we cry and you can laugh.
All is unreal when the fairy tale
feels time no longer,
simply constricts the mind.
clawing
gnawing
screwing
I miss who you were to me and who you never were.
I release you.
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Authors Note
I wrote this in high school. I was a very emotional and tended to write when I felt heartbroken. I also tended to have a lot of crushes and little heartbreaks.
About the Creator
Jazzy
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Head of the Jazzy Writers Association (JWA) in partnership with the Vocal HWA chapter.
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Comments (2)
Really impressive high-school work! such promise. :)
“I miss who you were to me and who you never were.” I felt this line.