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Thunder Rolling

Riding waves of emotion

By K.B. Silver Published 5 months ago 1 min read
Thunder clouds in the Carson Valley by K.B. Silver

Eyes plastered open

Iris rapidly shrinking

Face suddenly veiled

Shrouded, unreadable

Left this plane

Slipped the ground

Heels pounding

Rhythmically

Caught up in a cloud

Riding the peaks

Narrowly avoiding

Bone-crushing troughs

Destruction wrought by

The sound of air

Breaking

The shape of water

Spun like cotton

Color seeping from the spray

Blue grey ombré

Armored to the cosmic nines

Atmospheric plates

Encrusted with

Electric gems

Lighting the night

With heat and passion

Resounding

Thunder rolling

Across fertile plains

To the place

Where my heart

Longs to be

Opening heart and throat

a deep rumbling groan

Issuing forth

From the deepest recesses of my heart

Sucking up

Every cloud of vibrance around

Letting out a piercing cry

Clinging on

To the wailing chords

Inside my mind

Tone evening out

To a haunting, desolate aria line

Words

Just sounds

In the shape of ideas

Crafted in sumptuous shades

crimson and sage

Pain shining out

Like light in waves

Co-mingling

With my resonant projections

The wilting land faltering beneath me

Sounding out my siren song

Compelled by pulsing vibrations

Plucked on strings of electric breeze

Shocking me

Sending waves of sensation

Washing over

My disengaged physique

Starting in the red clay dirt

I dig deep

Shuffling and stepping up

Building momentum

Grounding my core

Propelling my essence

Into the ether

With only air

And the speed of sound

To carry me miles more

K.B. Silver

Stream of Consciousnesssurreal poetrynature poetry

About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • Silver Daux5 months ago

    Sheesh, this is amazing! The imagery is stunning and I love the rhythm. This would be a powerhouse read aloud!

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