and while the rabbits scatter like the rattle guns
the eagle is shot blind.
since nothing can be heard from up high.
and then the wolves circle another
quivering field of simple chirping feathers
more eagles too young to even fly.
who shouts to the bleeding predator,
"carry the nest into the trees"
as the snap of teeth sends red onto the daisies.
can the bunnies truly know
if the eagle even sees?
the shrieking sounds like cheering
and wolves' howls like battle cries.
while the storm clouds choke down the sun
and the final light of the daisies' tears is shunned,
the bunnies heave up their memories
for the wolves to dissolve brutally
into sad, simple little feathers.
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Ruby Red
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


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Excellent piece