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This is where We Rise

When we hit rock bottom

By Rachel SteinmetzPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
This is where We Rise
Photo by Armand Khoury on Unsplash

This is where life dies out.

This is where we fall.

This is where we set our hearts

on a silent journey

somewhere outside of us.

***

This is where light darkens.

this is where we forget.

This is where we stop our tears

to ignore the sense of searing

from within.

***

This is where good dissipates.

This is where we flee.

This is where we shred our values

till all that remains

are muted echoes of memories.

***

This is where hope dwindles.

This is where we capitulate.

This is where we coat our scars

in the darkest shades

of the dingiest death.

***

This is where everything dries.

This is where we darken oursleves.

This is where we lower till we

hit rock bottom and...

Begin the climb upward

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Rachel Steinmetz

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  • Jennifer David2 years ago

    The title, subtitle, visual, and writing all work together so well. Beautiful and relatable writing!

  • T. Licht2 years ago

    Keep going! My top Story was my 40th! You really have a way with words...

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