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Things that remind me of flowers:

A few things.

By Jay,when I writePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2024
Things that remind me of flowers:
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Things that remind me of flowers:

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The ceiling fan in your bedroom that scared me, so we pushed the bed as far away from it as possible. Now, after a long night, I stare up at it and count its four petals rhythmically as my eyelids meet

Steady steady

They hold on

By Önder Örtel on Unsplash

Your favorite red lipstick on my favorite lips. Yours. The way they part when you form an O, the way they part when there’s an O forming, the way I can see where your red lips claimed my land; Marking it to say “I was here”

By Shingi Rice on Unsplash

When I think of us.

Corny. But true.

Little seeds, unsure for a moment. Placed by the wind, the earth, the sun, the moon

Placed by fate.

Blossoming . Rising. Over any and all things. Looking at each other. We are each other’s winds, earths, suns and moons

Each other’s flowers.

And that’s the poem. I actually just changed one of the words which is interesting because this poem exists in the world somewhere else with another ending.

Thanks for reading.

Peace

love poems

About the Creator

Jay,when I write

Hello.

What?

23, Black, queer, yup

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  • Cutters Landscaping2 years ago

    Nice poem! I really like the way it starts and end.

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Truly is a beautiful poem, inspiring in the "I wish to be open and honest " way. Congratulations

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    This is so gorgeous! Lovely work!

  • Cindy Calder2 years ago

    This is both a spiritually and mystically beautiful piece, and I adore it. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well earned.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I like this ending.

  • Well Jay, you won my heart with this! Congratulations on your Top Story and you are so welcome to join us on FBs Vocal Social Society! ROCK, when I write.

  • Antoni De'Leon2 years ago

    I love everything about this poem. The words, the phrasing. Lovely. Congrats to you.

  • Wow this was heartbreaking but so gorgeous you have such a visceral talent for creating art in the everyday.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Beautiful. Congrats on the TS.

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