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Thin Ice

a nature poem

By Ellie HoovsPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Thin Ice
Photo by CHUTTERSNAP on Unsplash

Delicate,

nature's glass,

sparkling,

like crinkled saran wrap,

like a wedding veil,

there's still

warmth underneath,

and movement

- life you cannot see,

hidden in the

frosted over

deep

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  3. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Taylor Wardabout a year ago

    Haunting and delicate. Great job.

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    Your images and similes are amazing. Love reading your writing!

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