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Thin

moments 2: subjective/relative

By BrenPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
Thin
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trying not to give too little

trying not to give too much

trying not to feel anything

not even the simplest touch

in a molten mutual moment

of both strength and weakness

you let me give in to all your charms

i let you kick me down and pick me up

and then you let me into your arms

i let you trip me up

i let you catch me as i fall

i let you rip me up

i let you give me your all

i let you get right up and into my thin

right up and in and under my skin

exactly where the sensations stop

the feelings start to begin

they grip your gut and twist your spine

squeezing together and apart

everything becomes a soft whisper

your whole body becomes your heart

every fiery nerve end tingles

senses on fire and such

feeling everything all at once

even the simplest touch

For Fun

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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