There was a lot to say
There was a ton to say.
There was a lot to express and cherish that day.
The way was to go, in the event that you had come two days sooner.
Today in the sea stream
I'm going far away.
The leaves are lost as they float in the obscurity.
Gahan called me around evening time, and you came today.
On the off chance that you cry, unfortunately, my goodbye is at night.
Assuming that you come, O visitor
It was a dry season.
Futat Champa, that day, assuming Chaitali Moon grinned.
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
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The repetition of "There was a lot to say" emphasizes the weight of unspoken words and unexpressed emotions, the imagery of floating leaves in obscurity beautifully conveys a feeling of uncertainty and transience, the line about saying goodbye at night and the potential for tears evokes a touch of sadness, we‘re deeply moved by the poem, loved it, and hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this spiritual journey that touched our hearts Rony, subscribed.