Therapeutic Crackhouse Visit
(who knows....?)

i went to see your mental mum
just dropped in to say hi
she was whining at me constantly
i almost said goodbye
she said she's got no time anymore
got no time for this or that
i told her maybe i could help her out
and to grab her coat and hat
i took your mum to a crack house
and got her off fuckin guts
the more she took the better she looked
and was nowhere near as nuts
she got so high i tell no lie
she entered another dimension
the shadow people WERE scared of her
an amphetamine ascension
her fuckin shit was was so fuckin lit
like a thousand xmas trees
she tried to hide a smile so wide
said thanks and gave me a squeeze
she hit the pipe like a fucking pro
then she had a massive taste
did a line that would kill a horse
and then embraced the waste
your mum's a fuckin fiend dude
she can suck those uppers down
she's dented the fuckin meth supply
that would have fried a small country town
she was gordon fuckin ramsay cooked
she was off her fuckin face
i got my dealer to try and heal her
and now she's gone to outer space
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Bren
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Old ladies can be deceptive!