The World’s Tilt
A Meditation on the Edge of Night

Just as the world tilts forward into night
And shadows stretch with silence full of dread
The earth begins to give way.
I start to panic and think
Time flies, you know?
Its ticking deep within my chest
While darkness moves at a slow pace
To tug the stars from where they came to rest.
What person can truly grasp this turning world
That spins through silence alone?
The stars above grow faint and disappear,
And reason dims where once its light had shone.
No longer will the ground stay firm and true.
This world unanchored moves through the black
And we just specks upon this tilted earth
Can only hold on tight and not look back.
The crow perched beside me as I write
Looks on with eyes that seem to understand
While I with trembling thoughts I can’t contain
Write down these lines with unsteady hand.
Forward always forward we are cast
This tilted world still spinning without end
Until the final darkness comes at last
And silence wraps around us like an old friend.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.



Comments (4)
I love the flow of this poem and the addition of the crow!
Beautiful
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Deep insights, surely this is a time for contemplation.