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The Window That Cried

It drew me in where I did not want to go

By Marie381Uk Published 2 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Window That Cried

Rain tapped like tiny bones,

Across the broken glass I stared,

Inside the room, voices lingered,

I did not know if they called me.

Shadows stretched with grace,

A door opened without hands,

I felt the gaze of something lost,

It waited where I feared to go.

I leaned closer,

The glass shivered under breath,

It drew me in,

And spat me out.

The street whispered my name,

The houses held their secrets,

I shivered and turned away,

The night laughed behind my back.

A cold wind carried old echoes,

I felt unseen hands brush mine,

The rain soaked my thoughts,

And left me numb with questions.

I fled past empty doors,

The windows blinked as I passed,

Something watched without eyes,

And I could not look back.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    The rhythm and pacing are perfect for this kind of eerie narrative. Each stanza deepens the mystery and pulls the reader further into the darkness.

  • Paul Levinson2 months ago

    Great poem, including especially the title!

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